Lying in my cold bed. It was dark. I heard a sound so I closed my eyes. I slowly open them again, I saw a shadow, it had spiky hair and pyjamas on. It was my father. I said to him “what a waste of sleep time I'm going back to bed!.
Millan.
I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Great animation Millan, however you don't look very scared.
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