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Monday, May 20, 2019

School Gala Writing


Millan
This is the day I was waiting for the PAPARORE SCHOOL gala day!!!  I was soooooooooo!! excited i was going to pass out.I ran like the flash but nooooooooooooooo it was closed 2 minutes later it was open. I got 40 or 50 tickets and  got some chips hot dogs slushies taotao ferters with my mum.I wethe harley davidsons the blue nt on bike was crazy   fast.There was a hot pipe on the bike I almost touched hot pipe but luckily I didn’t theI saw my cousin jayden he hopped on a little bike I laughed.The next ride we went on was the slide we had to race up and down I got up the top jayden got stuck in the middle.I left him behind Ween he got stuck he was moving and shaking but he avenchale got through.we raced to the rock climbing wall I made it halfway jayden made it all the way I was jalis it was easy for jayden but not for me it was hard because the rocks were clawed into my hands.WE went to the golf by the old te kauru I got 3 goals jayden got two.my mum siad one more ride we said ok.we went to the luckily dip on the cort I got a spring jayden got a cup I laughed the end.


Millan


5 comments:

  1. Hello Millan I really loved the way you put in the colour writing. You might need to check your spelling. Did Jayden get out of the slide?. your post is very cool Millen.

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  2. What a cool school gala day wish i wasn't working that day.
    I would have had a ride on the Harleys as well, i did have some yummy Paua Pies when i got home thank you Millan.

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  3. your lucky I did't eat them

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