I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Friday, September 14, 2018
Wooden Arms
The house stood broken. A boy from a far country he walked Inside the broken where.he waited for a while then he brought his family over to the broken where.They painted it Sky blue but it was to Small So they moved but They didn't what to live it behind so they built a new one beside the where the where had the same color and they lived happily ever after. inside the new house with the Windows rainbow color.
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Hi Millan, I enjoyed reading your draft copy of this story and look forward to see your edited version.
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