WALT: retell a part of a story.
Lying in my cold bed. It was dark. I heard a sound so I closed my eyes. I slowly open them again, I saw a shadow, it had spiky hair and pyjamas on. It was my father. I said to him “what a waste of sleep time I'm going back to bed!.
Millan.
Great animation Millan, however you don't look very scared.
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