WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.
In the glittery ocean a fearless diver is searching for the lost city of Atlantic. is so misty and dark that the diver can't see the mountain of rocks that he's ramming into!! As he swim's across the razor sharp rocks he see's little cavern's with hungry crab's clawing at him. Then he sees an electric eel zooming through the water zapping everything it touches.
Wonderful writing Millan. I really like your last sentence. I could just see the electric eels 'zapping' everything.
ReplyDeletewow you really blew my socks off with that breath taking story . i love how you discribed it.thanks daisy.
ReplyDeletethank you!
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